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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Quests in Middle-earth/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:39, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
  • Lots of duplinks found using the usual tool.
  • Removed.
  • "into a quest" should be "on a quest"
  • Done.
  • "Half-elf" Elf should be capitalized?
  • Done.
  • 'Frodo "goes with the pain of a sad but noble decision"' doesn't parallel the structure of the earlier clause ("Bilbo's... venal motives"). It would sound better if it did.
  • Fixed.
  • The images are all licensed and used correctly.
  • Noted.
  • Just as a compliment, the article is very nicely illustrated; the medieval illustrations are used particularly well for the more abstract points.
  • Thank you!
  • The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
  • Spotchecks:
    • Birns, Nicholas (2012). "'You Have Grown Very Much': The Scouring of the Shire and the Novelistic Aspects of The Lord of the Rings". Journal of the Fantastic in the Arts. Verifies all claims made.
    • Hirsch, Bernhard (2014). "After the "end of all things": The Long Return Home to the Shire". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
    • Moore, Clare (2022). "Goddess and Mortal: The Celtic and the French Morgan le Fay in Tolkien's Silmarillion". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Overall a great article that has just a couple minor prose issues. AryKun (talk) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, will be passing the article. AryKun (talk) 15:10, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]