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GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:20, 1 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hello! I'll be reviewing this article to help reduce the backlog and gain points for the WikiCup. Although QPQ is by no means required, if you fancy returning the favor, I have a list of articles in need of review here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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Early life

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Professional career

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San Francisco Giants

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St. Louis Cardinals

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Texas Rangers

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  • End sentence after "that nearly came to blows"
  • "after Curtis insisted on turning off rap music that Clayton was playing whose lyrics Curtis objected to." → "Curtis objected to the lyrical content of the rap music Clayton was playing in the room and insisted on turning off the player."

Chicago White Sox and Milwaukee Brewers

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Later career

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Post-playing career

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Personal life

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References

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General comments

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  • Images are properly licensed and relevant
  • No stability concerns in the revision history
  • Earwig score looks good; high numbers are due to proper nouns

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 17:11, 1 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Very interesting to me to see what little things I missed in my expansion. I'll probably be finished with this tomorrow. – Muboshgu (talk) 04:14, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
GhostRiver, I believe I've addressed all points. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:48, 3 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
All of my comments have been addressed, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 19:04, 5 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]