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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Russian monitor Uragan/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Criteria
  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • Images are properly licensed checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Copyvio checkY
  • No dead links checkY

Prose suggestions

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  • "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), one of the faster ships in her class." Perhaps "During Uragan's sea trials on 31 May 1865, she reached a maximum speed of 6.5 knots (12.0 km/h; 7.5 mph), making her one of the faster ships in her class."
    • Good idea.
  • " but Uragan was modified for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage." Somewhat confusing perhaps: "but Uragan was modified, so as to be ready for the addition of 0.5-inch (12.7 mm) armor plates after completion. It is, however, unknown if they were ever fitted, although they were manufactured and then placed in storage."
    • I used slightly different wording, but your idea is sound.
  • That is all. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]