Talk:SMS Westfalen/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Anotherclown (talk) 12:58, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
Overall summary[edit]
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Overall, another good article.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- IMO the prose is fine for GA, but the article may benefit from a further rework prior to taking to the next level.
- B. MoS compliance:
No major issues, although I believe that units of measurement that form a compound adjective need to be hyphenated per WP:MEASUREMENT. i.e. "seventy-six 15 cm rounds" should become "seventy-six 15-cm rounds"- Those only get a hyphen when the unit is spelled out in full (thus: "15-centimeter", but "15 cm"). That's why the convert template doesn't add a hyphen for abbreviated unit (see: {{convert|15|cm|in|abbr=on|adj=on}}, which is rendered as 15 cm (5.9 in)). Parsecboy (talk) 13:55, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Yep, seen. Striking issue. Anotherclown (talk) 14:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Those only get a hyphen when the unit is spelled out in full (thus: "15-centimeter", but "15 cm"). That's why the convert template doesn't add a hyphen for abbreviated unit (see: {{convert|15|cm|in|abbr=on|adj=on}}, which is rendered as 15 cm (5.9 in)). Parsecboy (talk) 13:55, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- Well referenced.
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- Well referenced.
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass
On hold until the issue with the measurements is sorted, otherwise this is top work.Anotherclown (talk) 13:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Pass
- Pass or Fail:
- Units ("units" in the MOS sense, that is, the abbreviations for physical units) are never hyphenated per WP:HYPHEN. - Dank (push to talk) 13:56, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Got a reference? The MOS does say "when they form a compound adjective, values and unit names should be separated by a hyphen". It has also come up at an ACR of mine (and ever since I have done it in my articles). I'm going to be real annoyed if this turns out to be wrong... will have to change a lot of my work... :-) Anotherclown (talk) 14:02, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- WP:HYPHEN, and start reading at "values and units". - Dank (push to talk) 14:08, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Bugger. Anotherclown (talk) 14:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- WP:HYPHEN, and start reading at "values and units". - Dank (push to talk) 14:08, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
- Got a reference? The MOS does say "when they form a compound adjective, values and unit names should be separated by a hyphen". It has also come up at an ACR of mine (and ever since I have done it in my articles). I'm going to be real annoyed if this turns out to be wrong... will have to change a lot of my work... :-) Anotherclown (talk) 14:02, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
Passing now, well done. Anotherclown (talk) 14:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)