Photograph [ edit ]
A photograph shows loading sugar sacks in Hawaii, but the caption and text discusses a case involving sugar shipped from Java. The photo therefore seems to be unrelated.
Kablammo ( talk) 21:04, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
GA Review [ edit ]
This review is transcluded from Talk:SS West Cheswald/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA, and should have the full review up within a couple of hours.
Dana boomer ( talk) 20:18, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
(see GA review here for criteria)
reasonably well written.
(prose): b (: MoS)
In the Arctic convoy section, you say "Her closest class occurred". I'm not sure what this is supposed to say, or I'd change it :)
I don't know what sort of brain lock-up occurred there. It should have said "her closest
call occurred". Now fixed. — Bellhalla ( talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
I was pretty sure it was something like this, but I figured it was probably better that you made sure :)
Dana boomer ( talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC) It is
factually accurate and .
(references): b (citations to : reliable sources) c (: OR) It is
broad in its coverage.
(major aspects): b (focused): It follows the
neutral point of view policy
Fair representation without bias: It is
No edit wars etc.: It is illustrated by
, where possible and appropriate.
(images are tagged and non-free images have : fair use rationales) b (appropriate use with : suitable captions)
Just one minor prose issue to be addressed before I pass this article for GA, so I'm putting it on hold. Drop me a note if you have any questions.
Dana boomer ( talk) 20:35, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Reply above. —
Bellhalla ( talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Everything looks good now, so I'm passing the article.
Dana boomer ( talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)