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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lede

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  • "although finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom." - although he finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom.

Background

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  • Winter Olympics is a dab link
  • "fellow skier Leyti Seck was the national's sole athlete" - missing team in between "national's" and "sole"
  • "Seck, a Germany-born athlete" - German-born
  • "not finishing in the Men's slalom or giant slalom." - but not finishing in the men's slalom or giant slalom

Alpine Skiing

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  • Nothing wrong here

References

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  • All the text is supported by the references
  • Sports Reference should only be linked on the first instance
  • Paris Match, Eurosport Vancouver Sun, Reuters and Associated Press need to be wikilinked
  • Reference 5 needs The Sunday Telegraph as its work
  • no dead links

On hold for the issues. Good work! MWright96 (talk) 18:21, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for reviewing, I've made the changes you listed. Miyagawa (talk) 19:23, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Nice. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:37, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]