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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
This is the last remaining songs GAN from October, therefore I shall wipe it out! --K. Peake 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead
[edit]- Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
- Why are the producers ordered differently in the infobox from elsewhere?
- In the prose, add after the main producers, "with co-production from Rosa."
- Wikilink love song
- "while he continues to live" → "while continuing to live"
- "who complimented its production" → "who complimented the production"
- "reached the summit of" → "reached the summit of both"
- "The track was" → "The version was"
- Wikilink music video and add some info to the lead about the synopsis
Background and release
[edit]- Remove the comma before Vuelve
- It does not appear that any of the sources here actually back up critics in general praising the album
- @Kyle Peake: Los Angeles Times article is a review of the album, praising it and giving it 3.5 stars out of 4, but if I need to add more reviews to back it up, I will add. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 10:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
- This is one review so is not a suitable source for consensus and I don't think adding multiple ones is suitable for backing up critics praising it; use a source that states the reviews were positive or remove this part. --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- "It topped the charts" → "The song topped the charts"
- "has been working" → "had started working"
- "that his album," → "that the album,"
- "has been set for" → "had been set for"
- Pipe best-selling singles of all time to List of best-selling singles
- Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
- "mentioning that the album was" → "mentioning that it was"
- "that one of the album's tracks" → "that one of the tracks" because we already know this is about the album
- "Martin dedicated the track" specify if this is the former or latter
- "on August 30, 1999, September 15, 1999, and" → "on August 30, September 15, and" since 1999 being after the last date makes it clear all of them are from the year
- "The maxi singles contain different" → "The singles contain different"
Music and lyrics
[edit]- Audio sample looks good!
- Like I said about the lead, mention the co-production after the lead producers
- "According to the both versions'" → "According to both versions'"
- Remove pipe on beats per minute
- Wikilink love song
- Are you sure the punctuation shouldn't be inside quotes for the lyrics?
Critical reception
[edit]- "and heartfelt" and "boasting" → "and heartfelt", and "boasting"
- "of Robi Rosa’s" → "of Robi Rosa's" (wrong apostrophe format)
- "in the feels".[37]" → "in the feels",[37] while" merging with the following sentence
Accolades
[edit]- ""Bella" was also nominated for" → "It was also nominated for"
- 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards → 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards
- "in Pop/Ballad category" → "in the Pop/Ballad category"
- Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards
Commercial performance
[edit]- "it became Martin's second top five" → "the song became Martin's second top-five"
- "and Adult Contemporary, respectively." → "and Adult Contemporary charts, respectively."
- "On the latter, it spent 38 weeks on the chart, becoming Martin's first top 10" → "It spent 38 weeks on the latter chart, becoming Martin's first top-10"
- Mention the date it was certified by the RIAA and that this is for those copies in the US
- Remove Spanish-language intro to "Bella" since this is already known
- "It also peaked" → "The track also peaked"
- Per Geographical order, Canada should be the first of the para and use the title at the start of this sentence instead
- "top five hit in the country," → "top-five hit in Canada,"
- After the Australia sentence, add one about how the song reached the top 10 in New Zealand, peaking at number eight
- Croatia should be after the Oceania territories per Geographical order, then follow it with the other top 10 and 20 ones that are in Europe
- [72] is not displaying any position
Music videos
[edit]- Img looks good!
- Remove "for "She's All I Ever Had"" after the accompanying music video part, as the term accompanying makes it clear this is for the song
Live performances and appearances in media
[edit]- The term "impressive" is not encyclopedic to describe women, so remove the word
- "the sixth performance" → "the sixth best performance"
- "Daneesha Davis of" → "Daneesha Davis of the"
- "of the former as" → "of the song as" because it was sentences ago that both were mentioned
- "in 2006 where Martin" → "in 2006, where Martin"
- "as snake on" → "as the snake on"
- Pipe season two to The Masked Singer (American season 2)
- It is not the American series, the song was covered on the second season of the Bulgarian series, which I already piped. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:51, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
Formats and track listings
[edit]- Good
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Good
Charts
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]- Pipe HRT TO Hrvatska radiotelevizija
- Again, the Iceland position is not displayed by the source
Year-end charts
[edit]- Good
Certifications and sales
[edit]- Retitle to Certifications per no specific sales figures being mentioned by a source
Release history
[edit]- Good
See also
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks nice at 30.6%!!!
- Add the language parameter to ref 5
- WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 21
- Add the language parameter to ref 22
- Wikilink The Indianapolis Star on ref 25
- Pipe The Gazette to Montreal Gazette on ref 34
- WP:OVERLINK of Tidal (service) on ref 36
- Remove wikilink on The Indianapolis Star for ref 38
- Pipe BMI Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards on ref 50
- Pipe Nielsen Business Media, Inc to Nielsen Holdings on ref 61
- Pipe Croatian Radiotelevision to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 66
- Ref 72 needs to be working for the Iceland position, so either add an archive or different source and italicise Dagblaðið Vísir then pipe to DV (newspaper)
- Cite Univision as publisher on ref 85
- MOS:QWQ issues with ref 89 and wikilink MTV News
- Add Tidal as publisher for ref 93
- WP:OVERLINK of El Diario La Prensa on ref 97
- Wikilink Music & Media on ref 114
- Cite last name then first on ref 116
- Add an archive, replace or remove ref 129 since the URL automatically closes when I open it in a tab
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you for another wonderful review. As always it was an honor for me. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. Thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass time, you have done a solid job once again! --K. Peake 07:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)