Talk:Texas Recreational Road 7

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Former good articleTexas Recreational Road 7 was one of the Engineering and technology good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 24, 2012Good article nomineeListed
February 19, 2013Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Texas Recreational Road 7/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 23:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer[edit]

  • No dablinks;
  • Ext. links perfect;
Lead
  • Good
Route descrpition
  • Good, but i recommend some improvements on the prose:
  • Avoid using -way words at the start of each paragraph
  • Each sentence has "ranch". I think it can get awful, let's take a look:
  • "RE 7 begins at an intersection with SH 72, located several miles east of the unincorporated community of Tilden, as a two-lane, paved road." This sentence is perfect.
  • "The highway proceeds northward for a very short distance, before turning northeastward. The road proceeds northeast, passing through rural ranch land." "The highway proceeds northward for a very short distance, before turning northeastward, passing through a rural land."
  • "The highway continues past a small reservoir, and an oil drilling station, before re-entering rural ranch land. The road continues northeast to its northern terminus, the designated end of state maintenance. A road continues northeasterly to the reservoir, and ends at a boat-launch ramp." "The road continues past a small reservoir and an oil drilling station before re-entering rural land and following northeast to its northern terminus, the designated end of state maintenance. A road continues northeasterly to the reservoir, and ends at a boat-launch ramp."
Changed both sentances. - Awardgive, the editor with the msitaken name. 20:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
History
  • Too short for my taste, but nothing can be done. Soo, it's good.
Major juctions
  • Good.
References
  • Good.

I'll put it on hold until the prose recommendations are addressed. Regards. —Hahc21 15:42, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed concerns. - Awardgive, the editor with the msitaken name. 20:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. It passed. Regards! —Hahc21 21:51, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]