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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:The Angry Family/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:59, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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Plot

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Production

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Analysis

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  • This section looks good.

Reception

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Accolades

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  • I would change the first use of "Rosenthal" to "Philip Rosenthal" since it's been a few sections.
    • Double wait. You can do this in articles? If it's been a while, you can restate the first name? I thought you could only use the first name once and had to use only the last name the rest of the times it was brought up. Well, either it's "the more you know" or Wikipedia's policies and guidelines change pretty often. In any case, done HumanxAnthro (talk) 17:27, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That rule usually applies to stub-articles on Wikipedia containing two or less sections. Some readers might skip all the way down to #Accolades and be confused on who "Rosenthal" is referring to. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:50, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I get it. Interesting. I guess, as a lazy bum sometimes, I would do that. Hehehe. Like I said, done HumanxAnthro (talk) 17:53, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in the same ceremony" → "in the same ceremony"
  • This paragraph is a bit confusing as you list the two Primetime award nominations for the show, yet say that "this was the second time Everybody Loves Raymond was nominated for the writing accolade" before listing another nomination from 2000. Wouldn't this be the show's third nomination?
    • I see what you mean, but both episodes were nominated in the same ceremony on the same list, meaning neither of there were nominated before or after each other. Would writing "second and third instances" suffice? HumanxAnthro (talk) 17:27, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It would. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:10, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • What makes the "Online Film and Television Association" notable to be included in this article?
  • "same same ceremony" → "same ceremony"
  • "This mark" → "This marked"
  • Feels like a header can be made under #Reception titled #Critical_response with #Accolades being another subsection.
    • I've actually decided to just combined the two sections, since there's also a sentence at the beginning of the episode's commercial performance, plus if there were sub-sections, they'd all be way too short to justify having them.

References

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  • Archive all archivable sources (you can do it manually or with this tool).
  • Link every website used in each citation.
  • Try to be consistent with using "|first=" and "|last=" since the episodes are formatted differently.
    • Done. I took episode citation formats from good articles about episodes from The Office. Since there isn't a directorfirst1=, directorlast1=, writerfirst1= or writerlast1= in the episode citation template, I've just manually entered the [last, first] name formats; again, like you said, to keep consistent with name formatting. HumanxAnthro (talk) 17:51, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • There appears to be an error in the first citation.
    • Really? The site's loading just find on my browse- Oh! You're referring to the title. 'Raymond' is used to title the series, and the apostrophe is used in writers' (plural writers) to indicate possession of a "recipe for comedy." Is that what you were concerned about? HumanxAnthro (talk) 18:27, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think it was something about the dates having an error but the message is gone now. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:33, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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