Talk:Toby Twirl

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While there is initial material concerning Toby Twirl, the section about Sheila Hodgetts reads like a puff-piece in a magazine, complete with exclamation marks. She needs her own page as well (or instead of), but written with more facts and less opinion. Compare this article with that on Noddy and you'll see the difference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:8003:1405:3F00:51CF:FA8F:AAAB:7C75 (talk) 02:20, 11 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]