Talk:Tom Chatfield
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Puff redaction[edit]
I made some edits to reduce the puff, but I didn't resolve all of it.
A frequent speaker and consultant on technology and new media, he spoke at TED Global 2010 on "7 ways games reward the brain", was lead content designer and writer on Preloaded's game The End, and appears regularly in the British and international media as a commentator. His work is published in over two dozen languages.
The bolded material is normally found in promotional blurbs. In about 20% of the cases I've found on Wikipedia there's a reasonable justification for dangling sentence modifiers, but generally these fall short of encyclopedic tone. — MaxEnt 11:43, 15 June 2021 (UTC)