Talk:USS West Apaum

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Date	Process	Result
September 4, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:USS West Apaum (ID-3221)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Having reviewed this article, I have elected to place it On Hold, to allow a few minor issues to be fixed, mostly to do with footnote format.

Several footnotes lack retrieval dates (notably refs 2 & 4)
- Note 2 is an offline reference and, I believe doesn't need a retrieval date.
- Note 4 is a short version of the third item in the "Bibliography" section (which has a retrieval date there). If you think it needs the retreival date for the short form, I'll be happy to place it there also or instead. — Bellhalla (talk) 06:12, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Footnote 8 is somewhat confusing, as I don't see Shipping Board Operations listed in the "references" section.
- I was trying to avoid having to put "United States House of Representatives, Select Committee on U. S. Shipping Board Operations" and so abbreviated it. Since it was confusing, I have put the full institutional authorship. — Bellhalla (talk) 06:12, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Another excellent mercantile marine article, all the best in taking it forward, you can contact me on my talk-page if you have questions. Cam (Chat) 05:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My replies are interspersed above. — Bellhalla (talk) 06:12, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]