Talk:Westside Christian High School
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Stylistic
[edit]Condensing enumerated and bulleted lists to paragraph form
[edit]A project to be completed at a later date. NickSans (talk) 06:09, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
Improving breadth and depth of information
[edit]Redoing the Athletic, Academic and Performing Arts sections to make them styllistically homogenous. Another goal is to make their focus less niche and more comprehensive. NickSans (talk) 06:09, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
Miscellaneous
[edit]Mission statement twice
[edit]The mission statement is once in the lead summary section at the top, and has its own dedicated section. This stylistic decision was made to highlight its importance to the school. That being said, there is room for improvement as far as the summary section is concerned. Add your thoughts/ideas in the space below. NickSans (talk) 06:01, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
- To consider whether it should even be included once, see Wikipedia:Avoid mission statements. I don't see any evidence of its particular importance to the school. It seems like every school has one, and there's not too much variation between them. This one has religious implications, but that won't be a surprise to anyone who knows the name of the school.
- Just FYI, the section at the top is known as the lead section; see WP:LEAD for more information about its purpose. Larry Hockett (Talk) 06:17, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
- Alright, both points received and understood. I corrected my earlier comment to reflect correct terminology.NickSans (talk) 19:09, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
Lead section
[edit]I've updated the lead section to reflect WP:LEAD guidelines by removing the mission statement and comment on the school's history. NickSans (talk) 19:18, 28 October 2018 (UTC)