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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aiken ♫ 18:54, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Summary

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Well done, I think this meets criteria (bear in mind though, I think this is my first GA review...). Just a few little nitpicks:

General: Was he known as "William T. Porter" in general, i.e. is that the name he used on his publications?

Yes, generally that's how he's referred to in bylines and stuff. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:48, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead:

  • "After working at a number of small newspapers..." What is a small newspaper? Should it be "small newspaper company"?
  • Following this sentence is another beginning with "After working at a..." Could this be varied in some way?
  • What's a "tall tale"?
    • I've linked it.
  • "He left the original Spirit in 1855, but in 1856 was hired as editor for another sporting newspaper". Not sure the "but" is working there. I think "and" would work just as well.

Early life:

  • "He was one of five boys born to his parents". Isn't the "born to his parents" a little bit obvious? Also, were his parents unmarried or did they just not share the same name?
    • My guess is here that what we're seeing is current standards of scholarship (which is to not list women by their married names, but only by their maiden names) clashing with expectations that we'd give married names for women. The source gives her maiden name, but does not specifically state they were married, although given the time frame of their lives, they almost certainly were. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:48, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm confused: he left school to work in a shop, and then attended college? Is that in the right order?
  • "His mother died in 1825, which meant the family was broken up". Why would it mean that?
    • My source just states "His mother's death in 1825 led to the breakup of the family and the migration of Porter and his four brothers out of New England." I'd assume that was because W.T. was all of 16 when his mom died. Ealdgyth - Talk 00:48, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Porter gained the nickname of "York's Tall Son"". Do we know how he gained it? Height?

Editorial work:

  • "Porter published the first issue of a new newspaper". If it was the first issue, is it necessary to say it was new?
  • "The first attempt at Spirit of the Times failed quickly". Again, do we know why?
  • "In January 1835 Porter purchased the Traveller and Spirit of the Times and renamed the newspaper back to Spirit of the Times, and returned to editing it." Can one of those "and"s be deleted?
  • "Porter focused on selling his paper in the south and west". Of what? (This is repeated later on too)
  • "the Spirit became a repository of information of interest". Can one of those "of"s be deleted?
  • "Porter encouraged Southwestern authors". Is that someone from the south-west (I assume)? Would it be capitalized normally?
  • "Porter was instrumental in encouraging the careers of Johnson Hooper". Surely that should be singular "career"?

Later life:

These should be pretty simple to fix, and then your article should easily pass 1a and become a Good Article. Bye for now. Aiken ♫ 19:27, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

OK, all's good. Aiken ♫ 01:02, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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