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Cleanup, etc

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I just went through and did some clean up. I combined a number of very short sections (1 or 2 sentences) into longer ones, and tried to write it more from an out-of-universe perspective than from the (previously) in-universe perspective. This wasn't that hard, since I've never played Greyhawk, but as a result, some of the details might be more ambiguous or incorrect. If anyone spots something wrong, please fix it. Thanks. --OldManInACoffeeCan (talk) 00:42, 14 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Seems fine to me. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 01:13, 14 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]