Talk:You're Not the One/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 22:23, 1 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm more than happy to return the favor and review this GAN, my full review will be here shortly! WikiRedactor (talk) 22:24, 1 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Toolbox

Three disambiguation links to correct

Done

Infobox and Introduction

I would suggest removing the small text for "Los Angeles, California" (I've been trying to limit my use of it lately!)

Done

I also recommend California, because the link for Los Angeles is enough and I don't think the state is needed in this case.

Done

Please replace the semi-colon with a comma in the final sentence of the second paragraph.

Done

Background

"at a time where—according to her—Ferreira" should read "at a time where—according to Ferreira—she".

Done

Can you replace basically with something a little more formal like "essentially", "largely", etc.?

Done

Composition

"Nourish" sounds more like food to me, maybe "express" would be better here?

Done

Can you insert a {{clear}} template to keep the section from bumping into the heading for the next section?

Done

Critical reception

I would start the paragraph with a brief mention that the reviews were generally favorable.

Done

For the AllMusic review, you should restate that the album you are referring to is Night Time, My Time.

Done

I would specifically mention the author of the Time reference for the year-end mention.

Done

Music video

Instead of "advanced", I think "announced" would be a better word to use.

Done but slightly different; I had already used 'announced' in that sentence.

Live performances

When talking about the Bangerz Tour, you can just say "American" instead of "the United States".

Done

Credits and personnel

Night Time, My Time should be italicized.

Done

Spot-checking

Reference 28 (Idolator) needs the link in the citation.

Done

Reference 29 (New York Local) needs the link in the citation.

Done

The article is in good shape, and after these comments are addressed, I will be happy to pass the article. WikiRedactor (talk) 16:40, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- @WikiRedactor: I think everything's fine now! :) prism^△ 17:19, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - Passing, good work! WikiRedactor (talk) 17:26, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Non-reviewer comment

Article definitely needs to contain reviews of the song. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 07:48, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@XXSNUGGUMSXX: Check now! :) (I had accidentally reverted the article's new version. prism^△ 15:22, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I thought something was wrong :P. Otherwise, I would've said it needs massive expansion. Good luck in the review! XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 15:43, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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