Template:Did you know nominations/Bin Weevils

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 03:11, 6 December 2012 (UTC)

Bin Weevils

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... that Bin Weevils encourages children to play with beetles inside of a trashcan?

ALT1:... that Bin Weevils encourages children to play with weevils inside of a trashcan?
ALT2:... that Bin Weevils is a video game in which children play with weevils inside of a trashcan?
ALT3:... that Bin Weevils is a video game in which children play as weevils inside of a trashcan?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Spencer Township Hall
Comment: The facts in the hook should be verifiable right from the lead. The article was moved from AfC on Nov. 17.

Created/expanded by ForeverBoriSeddie187 (talk), Odie5533 (talk). Nominated by Odie5533 (talk) at 22:38, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Not a full review. The #Characters and #Bin Bots sections are unreferenced, and two references are WP:Bare URLs. Chris857 (talk) 00:49, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

I'd consider the characters and bin bots section to be about the plot of the game, which usually doesn't require references. In regards to the bare urls, I don't see any specific rule against them, but despite this, the guide does say they are not allowed. Regardless, I fixed the bare urls. --Odie5533 (talk) 01:03, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

In their current state, the #Characters and #Bin Bots sections do need references. I'm thinking particularly of statements such as "The most known..." and "There should be more coming soon". A general copyedit is needed too. Moswento ^talky 21:43, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

I deleted the two offending sections. --Odie5533 (talk) 01:17, 23 November 2012 (UTC)

Looks good; citation style is inconsistant but I don't think that's a criteria for DYK. I prefer ALT3 but any of them could work. Maybe wikilink video game as well. Focus (talk) 04:00, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I like any of the hooks I wrote, so I'll leave them for the promoter to decide, though ALT3 is fine. I linked video game. --Odie5533 (talk) 12:55, 5 December 2012 (UTC)