Template:Did you know nominations/David B. Bleak

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 17:32, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

David B. Bleak

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... that David B. Bleak (pictured) was awarded the Medal of Honor in the Korean War after killing five Chinese soldiers, four using only his hands?

Reviewed: Pyrenean Brook Salamander

Created/expanded by Ed! (talk). Self nom at 03:36, 19 March 2012 (UTC)

Hook: Short enough, interesting. Sourced. I'd suggest noting that he was a combat medic in the hook, as we tend not to think of them as particularly violent. Images is PD

Article: New enough, long enough. Referencing is thorough (GA note, your ref order needs work in some places). Attribution template used. Paraphrasing checked here, and it looks okay (some repeated phrasings, but in different contexts)

Summary: Hold for feedback on ALT suggestion Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:00, 19 March 2012 (UTC)

How about this? —Ed!^(talk) 14:50, 19 March 2012 (UTC)

... that combat medic David B. Bleak (pictured) was awarded the Medal of Honor in the Korean War after killing five Chinese soldiers, four using only his hands?
ALT1 is perfect! Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:16, 19 March 2012 (UTC)