Template:Did you know nominations/Kerispatih
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:57, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
Kerispatih
[edit]- ... that Indonesian band Kerispatih worked with President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono on two albums?
Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 08:33, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Hashim Abdul Halim, Biman Banerjee, Speaker of the West Bengal Legislative Assembly
- New eneough:
New Article - Long enough: 2085 characters of readable prose. Although the section on style is too brief for my taste.
- Cited hook :
The hook is cited, and the source does mention the band singing a song the president wrote. But only the one. - Hook content: The article only mentions the band singing one song that was written by the president.
- Within policy:
One heavily cited reference is in Indonesian, but a check with google translate shows that it does corroborate other sources. - Overall: I think the hook needs to be changed to match the article content. There are a couple redlinks article but maybe being a DYK article would help with that.
- I had forgotten to add it to the article after reading it. Please check again. Note that the second song is sourced to an Indonesian website. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:32, 2 September 2011 (UTC)