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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:18, 9 March 2012 (UTC)

Mary Kessell

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  • There are quite a few problems with too close paraphrasing e.g. "Marion Campell was one of the most successful interpreters of Kessell's motifs in a variety of hand embroidered methods." in the source and "One of the most successful interpreters of Kessell's motifs was Marion Campell who carried them out in a variety of hand embroidery methods." in the article. I've tried to fix another couple of instances but there are quite a few others. They all need to be fixed, either by rewriting or by quoting. Mikenorton (talk) 23:01, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I've made a few more minor changes to sentences that were still in my eyes a little too close for comfort. I've also changed 'traveled' to 'travelled' in the hook, as that is the more common spelling in British English. The date, length and sourcing are all fine. The close paraphrasing concerns appear to have been dealt with. The hook is interesting and short enough and cited in the article. Mikenorton (talk) 21:08, 8 March 2012 (UTC)