Template:Did you know nominations/Sten Grytebust

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:21, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Sten Grytebust

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~~... that Norwegian footballer Sten Grytebust, who is of Liberian descent, had George Weah as his idol when growing up?~~

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Created/expanded by Roghue (talk), Mentoz86 (talk). Nominated by Mentoz86 (talk) at 18:24, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

The article has been expanded from 669 characters of prose to 3,043 characters, which is 4.55x, short of the 5x requirement. There are bare URLs used as references. A user who did most of the recent expansion has not been credited. I also think a more interesting hook is needed. - PM800 (talk) 21:50, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that when Sten Grytebust was selected for the Norway national under-23 football team, he didn't know that such a team existed?
ALT2 ... that Sten Grytebust has been the first-choice goalkeeper for Aalesund since Anders Lindegaard left for Manchester United?

Now the article is 3500 characters, which should be enough. I've also removed the bare URL's, and credited the other editor which I forgot when setting this up. I've also proposed a couple of alternative hooks. Mentoz86 (talk) 02:32, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Expansion verified. AGF on foreign-language sources. - PM800 (talk) 03:26, 30 August 2012 (UTC)