Template:Did you know nominations/Zacharias Stopius

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Zacharias Stopius

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... that Zacharias Stopius was ennobled by the King of Poland, but his daughter Catharina Stopia became the first female diplomat of Sweden? Source: Here (in Swedish)
- ALT1:... that Zacharias Stopius's estate evolved into the municipality of Stopiņi?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Claude Mercier-Ythier

Created by Yakikaki (talk). Self-nominated at 19:46, 15 July 2020 (UTC).

New enough. Long enough. No issues with the sources. No copyright problems. Everything is fine, except that the hook lacks punch. I submitted an alternative. Edelseider (talk) 06:47, 16 July 2020 (UTC)

I don't really understand the "but" in the first hook. I'm changing it to "while". Yoninah (talk) 12:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)