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David Dunwoodie

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

~~... that David Dunwoodie was an Ice Dog twice?~~

ALT1: ... that David Dunwoodie had two seperate runs with the Ice Dogs?

ALT2: ... that although the Ice Dogs traded David Dunwoodie, he returned several seasons later? Rcej (Robert) – talk 02:56, 13 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed: Stereum sanguinolentum ([1])

Created by Salavat (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 09:07, 31 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Hook

Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Both stints are cited, but we should have the conclusion in the lead to make it more apparent. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article

Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality: Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: No problems. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio: No images. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:

Small matter of the hook fact being stated more directly and then we are set. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed alt hooks :) Thx for reviewing! Rcej (Robert) – talk 02:56, 13 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome. ALT1 looks better, takes less reading between the lines. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:49, 13 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]