User talk:Actionpotential
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[edit]This is a mess! It looks like a sports class somewhere took it on a year ago (look at the talk page) but then no content was actually added here (look at the history). I think it needs more content but also a bit more coherence. You'd have to find some content to do this, but perhaps it could be done by digging into the more specific articles about sports equipment and then building some better links into this one.
I do think that you could do this one even though you might also need some more content/references to really push it along.
This one is interesting because it seems to be mostly trafficked by brands. Clearly a NPOV issue. But again...won't you need to add more content? (Btw, note that I undid an edit on there where someone vandalized it a bit) Etherfire (talk) 20:22, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
@Actionpotential: -- This one should work, but you might need to find a bit more information/sources to make this look like a normal video game article, it needs some other info such as info on reception. Likewise, the West Coast one is a bit bare-bones so you might need to flesh something out there fore it to work. Etherfire (talk) 19:18, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
This one has two issues that might make it difficult: it has no citations and there isn't too much info (in addition to it being written like an ad). So in order to remedy this you'd have to find more information and reliable sources. So you might want to avoid. I'll poke around for a minute and post some other potential articles for you to work on. Etherfire (talk) 19:20, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
@Etherfire: I did think this one was kind of a stretch but I'll get to work on the Ghost Manor and will probably go with one that you would suggest for my second one because evidently I'm not having much success on finding the best articles for our purposes.
Aid effectiveness -- Here's a task for you @Actionpotential:
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