User talk:Agunderson
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:54, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi Agunderson, Madtoups, I wanted to give the two of you a quick note. In general this looks good - my main note would be to be careful of how things are phrased. By this I mean be careful to avoid things that could sound like an opinion or have too much of a paper/essay style to them. For example, with statements like "it is difficult" and "it is important" (ie, who thinks it's difficult or important?), attribute them to the person/organization/publication who made the claim in the source. This can often help resolve the above concerns. Offhand everything looks good and that seems to be the only major thing to point out at this time. Good job! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:42, 28 February 2018 (UTC)