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Again, welcome! WhatamIdoing (talk) 06:52, 18 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andres M Lozano (July 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Relativity was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Additionally, certain phrases used in this draft are in violation of WP:PEACOCK, examples of which include (emphasis mine) and scientist known for his pioneering work, where he has held several prestigious positions, His team’s groundbreaking work. Please make sure that this draft is written neutrally before you resubmit.

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‍Relativity ⚡️ 09:46, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Defaultmode42! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ‍Relativity ⚡️ 09:46, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andres M Lozano (July 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by 48JCL were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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48 JCL 14:56, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear 48JCL,

thank you so much for reviewing this one – and I am admittedly new here. I am a researcher in the DBS field and can say with confidence that Dr. Lozano is among the top five most famous people in this field, most cited neurosurgeon world-wide, etc. In your assessment, please also see Wikipedia:Notability (academics) – in which he would check many of the boxes. To name one example, the Olivecrona award is the highest honor given to neurosurgeons, world-wide.

I also did include many references that cover his work prominently (e.g. the article in the independent). But as an academic, the weight on news-stories is not as high as e.g. awards, achievements, contributions to the field, etc.

To help me better understand things: Would you be able to give some examples of sources that would convince you more that Dr. Lozano is a highly notable neuroscientist? Would news-stories about him be better or citation records? Would scientific articles help? For his case, everything is available (he even inspired a Dr. House episode). Since I'm new, I just don't know what you would find most convincing.

Thank you so much for further help on this!

Andy Defaultmode42 (talk) 15:36, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andres M Lozano has been accepted

Andres M Lozano, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Ldm1954 (talk) 13:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Learned a lot in the process! Defaultmode42 (talk) 17:43, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have sent you a note about a page you started

Hi Defaultmode42. Thank you for your work on Hagai Bergman. Another editor, Klbrain, has reviewed it as part of new pages patrol and left the following comment:

Thanks for creating this helpful biography. It would be helpful to integrate this better into Wikipedia by linking it from other pages; some of the biographical details also need referencing.

To reply, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Klbrain}}. (Message delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.)

Klbrain (talk) 05:09, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]