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Your submission at Articles for creation: British Cryogenics Council (November 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Stuartyeates was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Large sections of this are unsourced and other sections sourced to the org itself. Sourcing needs to be better.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Stuartyeates (talk) 18:44, 4 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Stuart,

Since the first draft of this page, a number of additional references have been added. There are 20 sources cited, of which only two are the org itself. The rest are independent sources (Institute of Physics, Royal Society, IEEE, various textbooks and peer-reviewed scientific articles, etc.). Could I just confirm that your comment requires further sources adding?

Are there particular sections that you consider need additional sources referencing? 2A02:C7E:274D:9100:1447:51BD:88C2:D012 (talk) 18:49, 4 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Andrewjbm! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Stuartyeates (talk) 18:44, 4 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 00:06, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]