User talk:Ariyont19
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I have read your add ons and I have some notes. To begin I believe you are doing well at maintaining a neutral tone while writing your work and should continue with that in the future. I was particularly impressed with the point of view that you added by Soloman that spoke on emotions being equivalent to actions in the sense that we are able or should at least be willing to choose them. I believe it's important to have this point of view disclosed in this article based on emotions. I definitely will keep in mind the use of different perspectives to expand upon my work and better it as we proceed. I also looked and read into the provided citations and see these as reliable and informative to aid you in expanding upon the article, Pasion (emotions).
One recommendation I do have to aid in the clarity of your piece even for you while you are adding pieces may be to add a couple of sections of the actual article into your sandbox so you can keep track of the flow of the article and ensure there are no redundancies. It can also help you by allowing you to expand further on sections that may be short of information such as the section within the article titled “In Marriage” or the section titled “Intellectual Passions”. I am sure as they are both very short sections that you may be able to add more information from your educational experiences combined with the sources you have provided to create more informative sections. Kiralopez13 (talk) 03:42, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
I responded to your review on my sandboxes talk page Kiralopez13 (talk) 21:35, 09 March 2019 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:35, 6 February 2019 (UTC)