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Globalization edits[edit]

Hi there. I reverted your edits to Globalization because they sounded a bit too much like essay content than encyclopedic material. Also, cultural globalisation is already covered in a different section of the article. Cordless Larry (talk) 09:41, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

To avoid this problem, I suggest citing sources for the material you add and trying to write in a more neutral tone. Don't make arguments using the voice of Wikipedia, but instead describe what the published literature argues. I'm thinking of the following lines in particular: "As globalizations continue to shrink the world into a global village, its impact on art is increasingly becoming kaleidoscopic. In particular, globalization has had significant influence on culture". Cordless Larry (talk) 09:56, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]