User talk:Enrique Camargo P
Bienvenido[edit]
I see you started adding information to Firavitoba. A couple of points:
- you provide no real references for the information you add. References work linking to (ideally online) sources where the information you add can be verified, there are no links to those sources now. Simply saying "I read a manual" or linking to a general archive site is not referencing.
- one reference you added for a word in Muysccubun refers to a Chinese author that doesn't write at all about the language, so is not appropriate
- I assume it was you who added the anonymous comments on Excelsio, which is good to solve bad information. But then add the proper translation in English and reference it, for instance with this link.
- you say "the municipality was not founded by the Spanish", yet the official website of Firavitoba says it was (1655)
- the amount of information is not well readable and needs to be made into paragraphs and subsections where needed
- proper translations need to be done, for instance this doesn't make any sense:
Twenty ages before arriving the Spaniards, who were like of seventy years each one, that is approximately in the year 140, everything happened in this property in normal form; Suddenly, it is said that he appeared from the south, like the sun, a character that had on his head and arms a sign of the cross and at the same end, a club that he carried in his hand, this was Bochica, the character I teach to work, to dress and to believe in God, raising the temple to My Lord.
I assume you're wanting to help, but the page is not up to the standards at the moment. Please add references and rework the text. Saludos, Tisquesusa (talk) 21:05, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
Enrique Camargo P, you are invited to the Teahouse![edit]
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