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Adding another "and" to extend a sentence when the sentence already uses an "and"

Hi. I reverted this change of yours for the reason stated, but I'd like to clarify it's not great to extend a sentence with another "and" when it already has one earlier on. I used "although" there to clarify what the source itself clarifies—that while the natural assumption might be, if one says all of an album's songs are "cohesive in terms of writing and production", that their themes all closely align but that in fact the similarities are about the tracks all having their own contained internal dialogues. Changing that clarifying word to an "and" just makes it read like an artificial and awkward extension of the sentence, and that's not the intent. Thanks. Ss112 17:17, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Did not see the earlier "and", thanks. Fortunat07 (talk) 17:18, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]