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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
EROS message 09:10, 3 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]


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Hello, Jiahualin! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! EROS message 09:10, 3 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings. Editorial style of presentation is apparent in your submission. I'll take the introduction lead as example. For more than 60 years, the Institute helped to improve the safety and health of people throughout the world. It was owned and operated by Liberty Mutual Insurance, Boston, MA, USA. This extract is considered not encyclopaedic and editorial in style as it reads very much like a newspaper article from a tabloid press. Your writing is too much like writing an essay. Hence, do read these for more clarity: Wikipedia:Writing better articles, Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch. Moreover, per the reason declined, there are numerous parts of your submission which are not inclined with citation of the references used. This is to prevent the facts you provided from being challenged in the future. EROS message 09:35, 4 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by K.e.coffman were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
K.e.coffman (talk) 22:45, 23 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jiahualin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CptViraj (📧) 18:15, 15 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]