User talk:Jiyoonjang

This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/UC_Berkeley/Ethnic_Studies_21AC_(Fall_2017).
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Short Corridor Collective (January 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MadeYourReadThis was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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MadeYourReadThis (talk) 21:38, 14 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Jiyoonjang, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MadeYourReadThis (talk) 21:38, 14 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]