User talk:Justiam

This is to create my User talk page.--Justiam (talk) 19:36, 27 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gemma Hickey (October 22)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Pythoncoder was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See WP:PEA — this draft contains a lot of promotional language.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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pythoncoder (talk | contribs) 18:14, 22 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Justiam! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! pythoncoder (talk | contribs) 18:14, 22 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

External links at Gemma Hickey[edit]

Hi Justiam, thank you for you improvements to Gemma Hickey! Came by to let you know that I reverted your last two edits, because external links are discouraged in the body of articles. Typically, if the topic linked is notable, it should have its own article which we can wikilink to. Alternatively, if the external link is the source for the statement, it can be inserted as a reference (as you originally had one of them). WP:ELNO has more detailed guidance, but feel free to let me know if you have any questions! POLITANVM ^talk 16:07, 15 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]