User talk:Kari Brewton

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Hello, Kari Brewton, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as What is life like inside a beehive, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may not be retained.

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Your contributed article, What is life like inside a beehive

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Hello, I noticed that you recently created a new page, What is life like inside a beehive. First, thank you for your contribution; Wikipedia relies solely on the efforts of volunteers such as you. Unfortunately, the page you created covers a topic on which we already have a page – Beehive. Because of the duplication, your article has been tagged for speedy deletion. Please note that this is not a comment on you personally and we hope you will continue helping to improve Wikipedia. If the topic of the article you created is one that interests you, then perhaps you would like to help out at Beehive. If you have new information to add, you might want to discuss it at the article's talk page.

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Hello

Hello, your article has been deleted. We already have an article about beehives, see here. Also, remember to write in a professional, formal tone, and don't put questions to the reader in an article. Also, remember to cite reliable sources. If you need any help, come to my talk page, or you can come to our live help chat, here. Thanks!

- ThePlatypusofDoom (talk) 15:28, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Life in a beehive

You may find Task_allocation_and_partitioning_of_social_insects#Temporal_polyethism interesting, as an example of encyclopedic writing on a topic related to your contribution to Beehive.

I would suggest avoiding the use of the word "important" in such descriptions; the text will be more informative if you show how particular processes or tendencies relate to the overall life of the colony. Regards, Just plain Bill (talk) 18:04, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]