User talk:Ki162

September 2022

Hello, I'm MrOllie. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. MrOllie (talk) 18:21, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I definitely want my content to be of high quality, and not come across as biased or promotional. I have been looking online for articles that can substantiate my statements. Most of the articles that reference "hospitality" and "hospital" TVs are published on industry trade journals or vendors of those TVs. I'm not sure if those are OK or not. Here is one I think would work. Can I use it?

https://www.healthcarefacilitiestoday.com/posts/Healthcare-televisions-enable-hospitals-to-offer-patient-centric-care--12384 Ki162 (talk) 19:57, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Blog posts, particularly blog posts written as 'guest posts' by marketing people, are almost never reliable sources. MrOllie (talk) 20:10, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I published an update with several citations. I spent a ton of time on this so I hope it passes muster. If not, I'll try to improve it further. I only used sources that were not guest blog posts from the marketing department of a company. Ki162 (talk) 21:52, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]