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Hello Mario, see comments and questions below based by section on Pascali and Arte Povera: WORKS (Pascali) (1) "Opposite to the “Armi series” in appearance, Pascali presented organic forms in a dream-like universe that, like the “fake sculptures,” play on the relationship between illusion and reality." - Perhaps you could be a little more specific with the adjectives that you use to designate the work since this description still doesn't quite illustrate what the work looks like. Naming some materials would also be helpful. Otherwise, your work on the Pascali page is insightful and your sentences are well-constructed.
ARTISTS (Arte Povera) (1) "In his (Nature Carpets), 1965, which gained him recognition and assimilation into the Arte Povera movement, Gilardi built three-dimensional carpets out of polyurethane which used "natural" leaves, rocks, and soil as decoration, design and art meshed together to question societal sensibilities towards what is real and natural and how artificiality was being engrained into the contemporary commercialized world." - This is an extremely long sentence, so for the sake of readability I would separate it out into a couple sentences. Also, what do you mean by "how artificiality was being engrained"? Do you mean material artificiality? It might be good to anchor your comments on such artificiality in the context when concerns of mass production and pop culture were central to artistic themes of the 60s/70s time period.
Vsmoon (talk) 15:43, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
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Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Piero Gilardi, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.
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