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Navyjer, good luck, and have fun. --jsfouche ☽☾Talk 02:57, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Hey Jerry. I just wanted to give you a heads up that Wikipedia has some, er, non-intuitive ideas that fall under the umbrella of the "notability guideline". Articles that may not meet the notability criteria are subject to review and often deletion, and sometimes this can happen months or years after the article is created. WP:BIO could be useful reading, and WP:VICTIM in particular. Best. HausTalk 04:02, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Hey Jerry. I took another look at the article and, beyond a couple of tweaks to the voice and tone, everything looks dandy. Here are some general tips on writing biographies that I refer to when I pop out a new bio article. Another suggestion is to go to the article, click the "history" tab, and look at the individual "diffs" (i.e. the changes) that folks have made to the article since you put it up. Also, there are a ton of examples of above-average biography articles among the good articles and featured articles.
All that said, given the few references that seem to be available on the fellow, I think you've done a pretty good job of covering him. Cheers. HausTalk 16:02, 14 December 2010 (UTC)