User talk:Not Overit
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:41, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --Ihiyotl (talk) 01:54, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]First: there aren't a lot of citations especially in the earlier sections. Finding citations especially for the different theories would add a lot of credibility. Second: the UK is split into sections based on century, and then also their prime minister. You could do something similar with the US and Europe sections. Third: there's nothing for South/Central American, Asian, or African countries so you could add sections for them. Give readers a bit of insight into what other places consider reform and how they go about it. It could be especially interesting if other countries have different theories of prison reform. Fourth: the Advocacy Work section is very short. You could cite Angela Davis easily through either her book or her speeches. I'm sure there's any number of people as well you could add to the section, as well as expanding beyond the US if you choose.