User talk:Retired User 21082022/Archive 4

GOCE review of Hichki

Hello, Retired User 21082022. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Hichki at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Tdslk (talk) 06:36, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Eurekha!

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Eurekha! you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 19:21, 30 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Eurekha!

The article Eurekha! you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Eurekha! for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 00:01, 9 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of A. R. Rahman: The Musical Storm

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article A. R. Rahman: The Musical Storm you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 17:41, 9 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of A. R. Rahman: The Musical Storm

The article A. R. Rahman: The Musical Storm you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:A. R. Rahman: The Musical Storm for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 21:41, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kajol

Hi,

I think the Bibliography section that you've removed should be restored. Especially if we want to take it to promote it to FA - the sfn format is called for. Shahid • ^Talk2me 10:28, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Shshshsh: None of the books is used more than once, I think it will be better if the bibliography section is removed. What do you think about it? If you are still insist, I will restore the section. Yes, I am going to promote the article to FA this month. If you don't mind, can you help me perfecting the article? —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 10:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

We don't use this format just for books that are used more than once. It's the preferable format in any case because we need to add more books anyway. So yes, I'd recommend that you readd it. Of course, I'll copyedit it when I have more time. Shahid • ^Talk2me 10:38, 19 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GOCE copyedit request

I've begun my first pass at copyediting the article Meena Kumari (book). Please expect a ping on the article's talk page as I will most likely have questions. My process can be found here. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:57, 21 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of In the Company of a Poet

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article In the Company of a Poet you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:21, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:21, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of In the Company of a Poet

The article In the Company of a Poet you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:In the Company of a Poet for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:21, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of In the Company of a Poet

The article In the Company of a Poet you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:In the Company of a Poet for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:41, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Tayi Arajakate -- Tayi Arajakate (talk) 19:41, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs

The article Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:01, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs

The article Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:41, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music

The article A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Tayi Arajakate -- Tayi Arajakate (talk) 18:01, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 14:01, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music

The article A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:A. R. Rahman: The Spirit of Music for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Tayi Arajakate -- Tayi Arajakate (talk) 16:01, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Important DS alert notice

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Minsara Kanavu

Hello, Retired User 21082022. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for Minsara Kanavu at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Cheers, Baffle☿gab 03:55, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess

The article Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PinkElixir -- PinkElixir (talk) 00:21, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Improvement of Shola Aur Shabnam article

Hii. Would like to request you to help me in order to improve the article mentioned above. I would like to extend its release portion, so you can assist me with suitable references. Looking forward for your help.

Thank you. Sahajitbro (talk) 06:34, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of List of accolades received by Black (2005 film)

Congratulations, Nicholas Michael Halim! The list you nominated, List of accolades received by Black (2005 film), has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best lists on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured list. Keep up the great work! Cheers, PresN (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 29 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

SRK movies

Hey there. To be honest with you, I really appreciate your work in Bollywood movie articles, especially that of SRK movies. If you have some time or can finish your pending work, I would really like if you can expand more on his other movies such as Chalte Chalte, Karan Arjun, Baadshah, Kabhi Haan Kabhi Naa, Ram Jaane, Koyla, Yes Boss, and many more. Thank you. We are the Great (talk) 18:42, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dilip Kumar: The Substance and the Shadow

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Hi

How are you?

Did you prepare something for Subhash K. Jha (I just know that you're preparing everything in advance)? I just want to know because if not, I'll do it myself in a few days. Shahid • ^Talk2me 11:07, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Shshshsh: Can't find enough sources for the article. Yes, please do it yourself. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:09, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, it's done. If you find anything else that can be added, please do. Shahid • ^Talk2me 13:35, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of List of accolades received by Mohabbatein

Congratulations, Nicholas Michael Halim! The list you nominated, List of accolades received by Mohabbatein, has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best lists on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured list. Keep up the great work! Cheers, Giants2008 (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 7 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Preity Zinta

You worked on it too, you think we should take it to FL?

No, but you can help writing the lead. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 10:05, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Writing the lead? I wrote the lead. Shahid • ^Talk2me 10:07, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe after Shah Rukh Khan. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 10:10, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, was just asking. Shahid • ^Talk2me 10:16, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion at Talk:Sarah Azhari

I invite you to please join the discussion at Talk:Sarah Azhari.

Hello, we are seeking help with the Sarah Azhari article, created in 2013 & recently the subject of a deletion proposal. At issue was whether or not the Indonesian language sources establish notability. I am inviting you to the discussion at Talk:Sarah Azhari#Help with Indonesian language sources because you are in the Category:User id-N & have a minimum of 1,000 edits across all Wikimedia projects.

I realize that some of you are very busy while others may no longer be editing. Nevertheless, I thought it wise to consult with you.

Thank your for the work that you do on Wiki[mp]edia! Peaceray (talk) 21:06, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pakeezah

Hi Retired User 21082022, I've begun working on the copy-edit you requested at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page for the article Pakeezah. Please feel free to contact me and to correct or revert my edits if necessary. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 00:12, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Nicholas Michael Halim; your reversions of some of the changes I made to this article are generally not improvements. In particular, you reverted my conversion of quote boxes into blockquotes here and here, which I changed for a reason. According to the Manual of Style:

"Pull quotes do not belong in Wikipedia articles. These are the news and magazine style of "pulling" material already in the article to reuse it in attention-grabbing decorative quotations. This unencyclopedic approach is a form of editorializing, produces out-of-context and undue emphasis, and may lead the reader to conclusions not supported in the material." (my emphasis).

Use of quote boxes in articles is editorializing because it gives undue attention to the quoted material. I will not revert your post-c/e changes at Pakeezah but I recommend you change the quote boxes back to blockquotes and please familiarize yourself with the Manual of Style. Please note I have no particular interest in the subject of the article. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 05:07, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Baffle gab1978: Ok, I have hidden them. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:09, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks; those quotations might be usefully worked into the article's text somewhere but I'll leave that to others. Good luck with your planned GA nom. :) Cheers, Baffle☿gab 02:11, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA nomination

Hi. For the last few days, I've been working on the article Deewana. I have improved it by adding more information with reliable sources. I would request you to kindly go through the article and see whether or not it can be nominated for GA now. Thank you. Sahajitbro (talk) 07:09, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sahajitbro: It looks fine for me. You can nominate it by adding {{GA nominee|~~~~~|nominator=~~~|page=1|status=|subtopic=Film}} on its talk page. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 12:06, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your cooperation. I have already nominated it. :) Sahajitbro (talk) 12:12, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sahajitbro: By the way, would you like to review Yasser Usman? Did you know how to review an article? —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 12:59, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Being new to Wikipedia, I have not yet reviewed any article. Sahajitbro (talk) 13:02, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sahajitbro: If you in case want to review an article in the future, you can read this (Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions) firstly. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:05, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

{{GA nominee|13:06, 21 February 2022 (UTC) what to write here? The name of the film?

@Sahajitbro: No, the template is placed on an article's talk page. You only need to copy this template, {{GA nominee|~~~~~|nominator=~~~|page=1|status=|subtopic=Film}}, and change the topic with the one that suitable to the article's topic. You can visit Wikipedia:Good article nominations to see all topics you can choose. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:10, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Meena Kumari (book)

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Meena Kumari (book) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:21, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Meena Kumari (book)

The article Meena Kumari (book) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Meena Kumari (book) for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:01, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Meena Kumari (book)

The article Meena Kumari (book) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Meena Kumari (book) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kavyansh.Singh -- Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 21:01, 20 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Hichki

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Hichki you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of VickKiang -- VickKiang (talk) 04:01, 25 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Hichki

The article Hichki you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Hichki for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of VickKiang -- VickKiang (talk) 23:21, 5 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of List of accolades received by Veer-Zaara

Congratulations, Nicholas Michael Halim! The list you nominated, List of accolades received by Veer-Zaara, has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best lists on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured list. Keep up the great work! Cheers, PresN (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 10 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sridevi filmography

Hi. I would like to request you add necessary citations from the book Sridevi: The Eternal Screen Goddess to enhance the article Sridevi filmography. I'm currently working on it. You can also help me by providing me a website where I can read the book for free as it is not yet available in web archive books. Thank you. Sahajitbro (talk) 03:18, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sahajitbro: I do not have the book so I cannot add it, sorry. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:20, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Nicholas Michael Halim Do you know any website where I can read the book for free? It is not available in web archive. Sahajitbro (talk) 03:23, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Sahajitbro: Usually Google Books provides book preview but for this one it does not, I don't know why. I don't know any websites that can provide full copies of books freely. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:25, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requested copy edit

Hi Retired User 21082022, I've begun working on the copy-edit you requested at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page for the article [[List of awards and nominations received by Shah Rukh Khan]]. Please feel free to contact me and to correct or revert my edits if necessary.

Sushi725 (talk) 19:32, 19 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Retired User 21082022. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for [[List of awards and nominations received by Shah Rukh Khan]] at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome!

Sushi725 (talk) 19:45, 19 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Bhakta Prahlada (1932 film)

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Bhakta Prahlada (1932 film) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of MSG17 -- MSG17 (talk) 03:00, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Bhakta Prahlada (1932 film)

The article Bhakta Prahlada (1932 film) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Bhakta Prahlada (1932 film) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of MSG17 -- MSG17 (talk) 03:41, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Do the editing you want to, but no personal attacks WP:NPA Suggestion

Regarding: Undid revision 1078375881 by Nenetarun (talk) Are you really this dumb or just trying to be funny? Go to a circus.

Really? Are you aware you will be blocked for personal attacks on fellow editors. Period. Nenetarun (talk) 14:30, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Nenetarun: I know; I don't care. Go ahead, and do what you want. Did I look like I care? You are aware if that will make me blocked but you don't know how the lead section of an article works, where you do not to cite any reference there but to summarise what is in the body. Please read the policy. The Kangana Ranaut article is featured and it has been reviewed by many people before it got the status and you without any shame add the "citation needed" tags. Please discuss first before you took further steps. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 20:38, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of List of awards and nominations received by Kajol

Congratulations, Nicholas Michael Halim! The list you nominated, List of awards and nominations received by Kajol, has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best lists on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured list. Keep up the great work! Cheers, PresN (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

March 2022

I noticed that a message you recently left to Nenetarun may have been unduly harsh. Please remember not to bite the newcomers. If you see others making a common mistake, consider politely pointing out what they did wrong and showing them how to correct it. It takes more time, but it helps us retain new editors. Thank you. ––FormalDude talk 07:21, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

	The Tireless Contributor Barnstar
	For your continuing stellar work on articles related to Hindi cinema. FrB.TG (talk) 09:15, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of List of accolades received by Dil Chahta Hai

Congratulations, Nicholas Michael Halim! The list you nominated, List of accolades received by Dil Chahta Hai, has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best lists on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured list. Keep up the great work! Cheers, PresN (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]