User talk:Sophie Innes

Vong Phaophanit and Claire Oboussier

Hi Sophie Innes, I've had to replace your version of Vong Phaophanit and Claire Oboussier with the earlier, sourced version. Your edits removed the few reliable secondary sources, rather than improve the citations. Articles need to be non-promotional and cited to reliable secondary sources wherever possible. Reliable secondary sources also help to prove that the subject is widely known and important. On the other side of the equation, articles cited only to personal CVs or gallery/agent websites suggest the subject is not suitable for an online encyclopedia. Sionk (talk) 01:40, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sionk, Thanks for your comments. I am not an experienced Wiki editor and I realise you are so I really appreciate your guidance. I am just about to put up another version of the page. I have spent a long time sourcing and providing citations and sources that I hope will back up the content and also be useful to Wiki users. I also believe that this new page offers more in depth and up to date information about them. I do have a long term and ongoing interest in these artists artists' work and I have written dissertations on their practice so I hope you will be able to respect the changes I have made. However I would also value any guidance or advice you may be able to give on improving the page. Sophie Innes (talk) 16:12, 25 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]