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Hi Snowded and thank you for your message. I have explained my reasons and proposals for the changes on the discussion page as suggested. I thoroughly value the work which has gone in to the introduction, and only seek to further improve it to make it more accurate (not to rewrite it), as is the objective of wikipedia's open-source editing. I look forward to your response on the discussion page. Sugar1080 (talk) 16:11, 24 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I will respond later on the NLP issue and provide a welcome template so you can read up on how things work here. In particular the med for reliable third party sources for all material. Before I do that would you confirm or deny if you also edited the article today from an IP address. Thank you--SnowdedTALK16:57, 24 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
