User talk:Voxinsocks
2020 JNU Attack
[edit]Thank you for your copy edit on the Guild of Copy Editors request for the article 2020 JNU Attack. The edits you made certainly improved the article.
If you want to look at the copy edits I made, simply click on "View History" and you can scroll your way through each part of the article to see them. For the most part my edits involved adding missing articles like "the", using more appropriate words and so forth.
The one Manual of Style issue I thought I'd draw to your attention is writing out times. The MOS suggests time be written like this - 2:00 p.m. The prevents a line break on the screen so that the numbers are not broken up. If you're writing about a range of time you can omit the first a.m. or p.m. - 6:00 to 7:00 a.m.
It might be helpful as you edit to read a paragraph out loud after you've edited it. You will often hear "mistakes" that you might just miss reading from a screen.
Thanks again for your help with the article.
Happy editing,
Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:08, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
Coordinator, GOCE
January 2020 GOCE drive bling
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The Modest Barnstar | |
This barnstar is awarded to Voxinsocks for copy edits totaling over 4,000 words (including bonus and rollover words) during the GOCE January 2020 Backlog Elimination Drive. Congratulations, and thank you for your contributions! Reidgreg (talk) 17:02, 10 February 2020 (UTC) |
Thanks for helping to bring the copy-editing backlog to a record low! – Reidgreg (talk) 17:02, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
October 2020 GOCE blitz award
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The Minor Barnstar | |
This barnstar is awarded to Voxinsocks for copy edits totaling between 1 and 1,999 words (including rollover words) during the GOCE October 2020 Copy Editing Blitz. Congratulations, and thank you for your contributions! – Jonesey95 (talk) 03:57, 30 October 2020 (UTC) |
GOCE November drive barnstars
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The Minor Barnstar | |
This barnstar is awarded to Voxinsocks for copy edits totaling between 1 and 3,999 words (including bonus and rollover words) during the GOCE November 2020 Backlog Elimination Drive. Congratulations, and thank you for your contributions! – Jonesey95 (talk) 03:36, 8 December 2020 (UTC) |