User talk:Welsh Hamlet

I have just started my first new article. Welsh Hamlet

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Jenkins (pastor) (July 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Awsomaw were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Don't be dismayed. This is a really promising article, and I'm surprised there is no article already on this figure. Here's some thoughts and tips for submission:

1. The character meets WP:GNG because of the digitized print source www.welshrevival.org, which is good 👍.
2. However, much of the article reads a lot like an essay, with a lot of NPOV issues. I encourage you to read some other Wikipedia articles on pastors and see if you can make the style of this article more encyclopedic.
3. There's already some information on this guy on 1904-1905 Welsh revival, that you can work with.
4. There needs to be more information on the guy, and less information about the general Welsh revival in the lead, see WP:LEAD.
5. There needs to be more information about his life in the article and less information about where to find information about his life.

Thanks,

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Awsomaw (talk) 23:12, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Welsh Hamlet! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Awsomaw (talk) 23:12, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Jenkins (pastor) (August 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Awsomaw was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hi! Good work on the lead. The article reads a lot better, but it still reads like an essay or a book. Particularly, I think you can improve on cutting down the direct quotes. See MOS:QUOTE. In addition, the "Biography" section needs to be about Joseph Jenkins, not about where to find information about Joseph Jenkins. See how this article uses encyclopedic tone and talks about the life and career of the subject in the body of the article, instead of talking about other sources.

For the Welsh revival section, the same thing applies. In addition, you can give a short summary of the revival, and for information that is not already in the Welsh revival article, I'd suggest you add it to the main article and not here, since this is not mainly about Joseph Jenkins.

Let me know if you have any questions!

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Awsomaw (talk) 00:50, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

October 2020

You are suspected of sock puppetry, which means that someone suspects you of using multiple Wikipedia accounts for prohibited purposes. Please make yourself familiar with the guide to responding to investigations, then, if you wish to do so, respond to the evidence at Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/The Little Platoon. Thank you. Heart ^(talk) 04:07, 9 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Joseph Jenkins (pastor) has been accepted

Joseph Jenkins (pastor), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

- Rich^T|C|E-Mail 12:34, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Rich Smith: Hi there. Thank you so much for taking the time to review my article and thanks indeed for giving it the green light, I'm really pleased. Thanks again and all the best. Cheers Welsh Hamlet (talk) 06:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Welsh Hamlet. You have new messages at HeartGlow30797's talk page.
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Apologies for the delay. Mr. Heart ^(talk) 04:06, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]