User talk:Xoloz/Schools

I agree with this. Hipocrite - «Talk» 18:23, 11 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Merging

I've not much experience with school AfDs (I participated in one), but school stubs seem to me to be a natural candidate for merging: schools can naturally be grouped by geography, and doing so might lead to wider issues emerging that don't appear on the school level radar. --- Charles Stewart 15:22, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some suggestions

Hello! You have a pretty good and interesting essay, but might I make a few suggestions?:

Perhaps cite some arguments you have read elsewhere as support for some of your points. Consider, for example, this argument.
Avoid overuse of "However" as the first word in sentences. My reasoning here is based on "Avoid starting a sentence with however when the meaning is 'nevertheless.' The word usually serves better when not in first position. . . . When however comes first, it means 'in whatever way' or 'to whatever extent.'" -William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White, The Elements of Style, Fourth Edition (New York: Allyn & Bacon, 2000), 48-49.
Perhaps also link to some relevant discussions about schools, such as Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Westland High School (Galloway, Ohio) and Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Immanuel Lutheran Primary School.

I hope that helps! Sincerely, --Le Grand Roi des Citrouilles^Tally-ho! 20:25, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]