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Albus Dumbledore[edit]

Nominator(s): Jkaharper (talk) 14:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
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I am nominating this for featured article because

  • The article is interesting and contains enough information to meet the criteria of a featured article.
  • Is grammatically correct and I believe everything to be set out appropriately and neatly.
  • All information featured in the article, requiring sources seem to be backed up.
  • The article contains good quality non-copyrighted pictures which are relevant to the sections, albeit another image or two would seem more appropriate in the future.
  • The article fully details just about everything there is to be said about the character's life, including everything not featured in the books but mentioned by Rowling herself.

Thanks. --Jkaharper (talk) 14:20, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

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  • Comment: instead of saying "It is revealed in X", as you have done, just write "In X". Sceptre (talk) 18:48, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Removing FAC, see WP:FAC instructions regarding consultation with significant contributors. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:37, 18 April 2009 (UTC)