Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Commando raids on the Atlantic wall/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Dabomb87 22:05, 7 September 2010 [1].
List of Commando raids on the Atlantic wall[edit]
List of Commando raids on the Atlantic wall (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:19, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because, even though it is my first attempt at a Featured List I believe it meets the criteria. It has just had a WP:MILHIST peer review and all comments have been addressed.. Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:19, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment I'll come back and do a full review of this later, but we don't start FL's like this anymore. Look at Army of the Danube order of battle for a somewhat similar list for an idea of how to open this list. When you're done, there is unlikely to be any bold text left. Courcelles 19:45, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment—no dab links, no dead external links. Ucucha 06:42, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Can't understand why Operation Chariot is referenced as the greatest raid of all time multiple times in the article. The only reason given is because Jeremy Clarkson made a documentary about it. Objectively it seems to me as Operation Claymore and Operation Archery had much better results especially as in Operation Chariot many were killed and many more captured. Philistus (talk) 23:34, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Reply - No Clarkson did a BBC programme on the raid which used the title already in common use see here for a Google book search [2] The term is only used twice once in the lede and once beside the entry for the raid. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 06:27, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Reply - oh ok, I get it now. Thanks for explaining. Philistus (talk) 14:30, 27 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Sandman888 (talk) Latest PR 17:26, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply] |
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*comment Sandman888 (talk) Latest PR 17:16, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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- After sorting is ordered I support this list. Btw, per wp:lead, a picture up in the lead section would be good. Sandman888 (talk) Latest PR 17:26, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Well written and well sourced list. Ruslik_Zero 08:08, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:32, 26 August 2010 (UTC)[reply] |
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*Is there a consistent approach to capitalising Commando? "of all Commandos captured" vs "chronological list of all the commando raids"
The Rambling Man (talk) 13:53, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support! One question: Is alt-text required on pictures in galleries? MisterBee1966 (talk) 14:06, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- I was not sure so tried to add alt text but it does not work within the gallery template. Jim Sweeney (talk) 21:58, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- The FLC criteria doesn't require alt text at all at present. Courcelles 01:48, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- I was not sure so tried to add alt text but it does not work within the gallery template. Jim Sweeney (talk) 21:58, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Courcelles 21:58, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply] |
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*Comments
In general, this needed to go through an ACR over at Milhist, as the prose is choppy and lacks a lot of flow. It needs attention from subject matter experts as well as an independent copyeditor.
Courcelles 17:19, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support Courcelles 21:58, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comments
- Place of publication needed for virtually all references.
- Titles should follow Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(capital_letters)#Composition_titles--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:16, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes missed that - both done --Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:02, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- I've found it very helpful to build a library page with all of my books and references properly formatted; you might consider the same.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:24, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes missed that - both done --Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:02, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the support and that's a good idea as I use the same books all the time. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 16:11, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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