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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 07:48, 30 January 2013 [1].

Neftchi Baku PFC in European football[edit]

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Nominator(s): --►Safir yüzüklü Ceklimesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have improved this article considerably and I think it meets all FL-criteria. I am nominating this for featured list as I believe, that after quite some work, it's ready for FL Status. --►Safir yüzüklü Ceklimesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose not ready, try a peer review

  • Lead is too long, try four paras max.
  • Why is the list title used in prose to start the lead?
  • Don't bold links in the lead.
  • "5 ... 5 ... one" -> WP:MOSNUM says be consistent, either words or numbers in a sentence for comparable items.
  • The 5 and 5 and 5 and 1 and 1 and 1 add up to 13, not 12, you need to explain the difference.
  • "The club has an excellent European cup record," POV.
  • Overlinking, e.g. Baku.
  • "In 2012-13, Group stage" as a title, not good and if you use year ranges, comply with WP:DASH.
  • Why isn't the list in chronological order?
  • " 30-08-2012." isn't a date format you should use in prose, captions or otherwise.
  • The right-hand table isn't explained at all.
  • Table doesn't comply with WP:ACCESS most notably MOS:DTT.
  • Season years were delineated in the lead with an en-dash, in the table with a slash. Be consistent.
  • Need to check the "result" graphics are readable by screen readers. Not sure they're necessary, would suggest an aggregate score and an explicit Won/Drawn/Lost result.
  • Lots of the Key is irrelevant not used.
  • "Participations" not even sure if this is English.
  • Refs need consistent formats, access dates, correct publication dates, publishers etc.

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:34, 18 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]


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