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13 Sentinels: Aegis Rim

This peer review discussion is closed.

I've listed this article for peer review because… I'm planning to take this article to GAN in the near future. The section I feel needs the most suggestions and edits is the synopsis. This game has an extremely complicated and convoluted, and summarising both the overall plot and dedicated threads for each protagonist is quite difficult. I've done several recent edits and trimming, but I still feel extra eyes are needed. Other sections too would benefit from a look.

Thanks, ProtoDrake (talk) 13:11, 1 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not here to review this, but it's over a month since the PR started and until now there were no users reviewing this thing. What I'm doing here is that I'm commenting now, because this B-class article is obscure. Why are little-known PRs like this not attracting big attention? I'm intending you to answer this question. If you want me to review this article, then I'll accept having to PR the whole thing or something. -ias postb□x 18:25, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

But wait, it's attracting attention recently? Can the PR be continued? -ias postb□x 18:42, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fine, my only review for this article is that you should simplify everything, period. That'll solve the issue. -ias postb□x 18:49, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing peer review 'cause it's finished! -ias postb□x 15:15, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]