Wikipedia:Peer review/Be Here Now/archive1

Mediocre album by a great band; there is a good story here, hope that it is conveyed. Ceoil 21:46, 26 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I had a little trouble following the cast of characters. Who is McGee? In "Recording" can you specify who Morris is (I skipped the intro).
There are a couple of small unreferenced quotes throughout, like "regular, everyday collection of tunes." and "cocaine set to music".
"generated more hype than the British music industry had seen in decades" is quite the statement...the last 9 words are probably not necessary.
At the end of the first paragraph of "Reception", what is the footnote (currently #19) sourcing? (Hint: the link is to the wrong site but is a copy of footnote #22) --maclean 06:32, 27 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Comment The music sample description could perhaps be extended. What number track is it on the album, what characterised the piece? etc. CloudNine 11:00, 27 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the tips, all now implemented. Ceoil 21:59, 28 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]